CLARIFICATION REGARDING MY BOOK

Hey everyone! 🤗💗

I wanted to take a moment to clarify a few things about my story and also ask for your opinions.

1️⃣ Kashi's Character Development

I know some of you might feel that Kashi's character is weak but trust me, her journey is just beginning. She is not weak, life has simply thrown immense challenges her way from a very young age, forcing her to sacrifice the opportunities that could have made her stronger earlier. Her transformation into a strong queen is in progress, but it won't happen overnight. Growth takes time, and I want to portray the realistic emotions, feelings and fear of a commoner stepping into the royal world. Vishwa is doing his best to take away her insecurities, and while he has succeeded to some extent, there are still lingering doubts in her mind. In the next chapter, there will be a scene where Kashi's insecurities will be triggered again, adding depth to her journey. But don't worry, I have a lot planned for her, and she will rise stronger. Please trust me. She is not weak, just a little shy and naive at the moment!

2️⃣ The name "Veer Ji"

Also I want to clarify some things regarding the name "Veer ji" in my story: The name Veer means brave or hero in Hindi, which perfectly reflects Vishwanath's personality. Kashi calls him "Veer" as a sweet endearment. It is a name she is deeply attached to, and the term "ji" is added out of respect and affection. I understand that in some states, especially Punjab, Veer ji is a term commonly used to mean "big brother." However, I want to emphasize that in my story, Veer ji does not mean brother. It is purely a term of love and admiration that Kashi uses for Vishwanath. The first person Kashi met and fell in love with was Veer, the man she knew before discovering his true identity as Vishwanath Rai Singhania. She became deeply attached to that name because, to her, Veer was the one who showed her kindness, protected her, and became her source of comfort. Even after learning who he truly is, that name holds a special place in her heart. Calling him 'Veer Ji' is her way of holding onto the love and connection she felt from the very beginning.

I read a comment related to this, which prompted me to clarify it here. Previously, I conducted a poll to consider changing the name, but most readers voted to keep it as it is. Now that we have almost completed half of the book, changing it feels really overwhelming to me. However, I'm still open to hearing your thoughts, what do you think about it ? Your feedback is always important to me.

3️⃣ Romantic Dialogues

Guys i wanted to ask do you enjoy the romantic dialogues between Kashi and Vishwa? Are they hitting the right emotions, or do they feel cringy? Please be honest, I really value your feedback!

4️⃣ Scene Suggestions

While I have the storyline planned out, I would love to hear your ideas! If you have any scene suggestions, feel free to share them. And for those who have already suggested something, don't worry! I have noted your ideas, and they will be incorporated at the right time in the story. Just be patient.

I hope this clears things up! Any more questions? Let me know, I would love to hear your thoughts! ❤️

Lots of Love,

Smiling Cupcake☺️🧁