The next part you will read is the original plot. It's all over the place and includes synopsis, character details, original character names and who I thought could play the two main leads, additional characters, time line and additional notes.
I've always been fascinated with the story writing process so please enjoy if you want to know how the story originated, compared to how the story ended up.
I post this with all it's faults, mistakes and everything that makes no sense. I wrote this plot over three full days in a frantic word vomit. So don't take it too seriously.
Also, I left the original names I used so if it gets too confusing to read feel free to skip this part.
Saturday, 20 July 2024
Plot Idea #1
First year student Tae settles into university life nicely. However, there's something odd going on with his dormitory room, and over the next few months he'll discover a mystery connected to the past occupant, San. As the relationship between these two begins to grow after some misunderstandings and discoveries of their situation, it later becomes clear there's a hidden threat both must solve together for there to be any future for them both.
Main Characters
Tae (Fourth) or (Keen) First year university student. Moves into dorm. Makes new friends. Settles in well. Stable family life. Great personality. Discovers his dorm room connects with the previous occupant the year prior.
San (Gemini) or (Sea) Second year university student. Smart. Only son and grandson for a wealthy family. Meets a person from the future who will save his life.
Additional characters
Cash - Tae's best friend (Paul - Tanan Lohawatanakul)
Min - San's best friend (Ken - Kanthee Limpitikranon)
Pear - San's first oldest cousin
Berry - San's second oldest cousin
Backdrop
Dormitory room the same but differences.
Tae - Rooms has a key hook handing on wall in the room entrance. Chair beside the bed by the window has "character merch plush" related to Tae
San - Lamp is closer to the door on the desk, no key rack. Chair beside the bed by the window has "character merch plush" related to San
Cupboard door has the same sticker in both room.
Additional Notes
School terms May - September & Mid October - February
Timeline
San                  Tae
December 2023 Â Â Â Â Â May 2024
January 2023 Â Â Â Â Â Â Â June 2024
February 2023 Â Â Â Â Â Â July 2024
New note: Three words from JB to be included in the story. (This is something my son requests in all the new stories I write.)
Tahitian, Stethoscope, Prism
V3
Change the beginning - Min to have a bigger role in the storyMore conversation about why the time travel, be inquisitive.
V4
change how the boys meet Min - Cash first.Include more scenes with Cash and Min (side story)Consider updating Cash and Min's names to other GMMTV actors.
Episode breakdown to follow