The next few weeks went by smoothly. John began to do different exercises every day. He was losing weight, which was something he had never been able to do before. John had always had a layer of flab coating his muscles. He wasnât sure if it was all the working out or his Gift finally kicking in, but he liked it. He might even have some abs soon.
Even that cute girl in Mr. Franklinâs class seemed to notice. Madelyn Ellis, what a beautiful name. Her dad owned the local mill where many of the other kidsâ parents worked. But unlike many rich kids heâd met, Madelyn didnât flaunt her money. If anything, her clothes were nice but simple: jeans and a baseball t-shirt, and the glasses she wore were more functional than stylish.
Sheâd even begun to wave and smile at him in the hallways. John always felt flummoxed when a girl showed interest, so he looked back into his locker as fast as he could. Donovan had rolled his eyes when John had told him about it later during American History.
âDude, you really need to learn how to talk to girls,â Donovan whispered to him. Sam was teaching about the Civil War, and John, unlike Donovan, who was doodling in his notes, was actually trying to pay attention. âShe likes you, man. Take a look.â
John glanced across the room at Madelyn. It was difficult because she was in the back near the door while he was in the far front next to a window, but he did his part. True to Donovanâs word, she was peering at him with those beautiful gray eyes. When his eyes met hers, she smiled. His heart fluttered, and he felt it try to fly out the window.
âMr. Blackstone, Iâm pretty sure the information Iâm giving is not on Ms. Ellisâ face. Please pay attention, both of you. And no more whispering to your friend, Mr. Durham,â Sam said, hands clasped together behind his back.
âYes, Mr. Franklin,â Madelyn and John said in unison.
âYes, Uncle Sââ Donovan began, but finished with, âYes, Mr. Franklin.â
âGood,â Sam said as he returned to his lecture, âNow, as I was saying, John C. Calhounâs defense of slavery in the South led directly to the Civil Warââ
Madelyn raised her hand.
âYes, Ms. Ellis?â Mr. Franklin asked. âUm, if the United States did all these bad things, like slavery and stuff, why do people say weâre exceptional?â
John waited, wondering how Mr. Franklin would answer. That did seem like a good question. John wouldnât have had a clue how to answer that.
Mr. Franklin actually seemed pleased. âThatâs an excellent question. Some people would say weâre just awesome. Some would say that we arenât exceptional. Weâre just like all the other countries in the world, no better, no worse. I would answer with a question: which would you rather be called, a hypocrite or a monster?â
Madelyn thought for a moment. âA hypocrite, I guess?â
Mr. Franklin smiled. âGreat! I mean, not great that youâre a hypocrite. Itâs a good answer. I think we would all rather be called a hypocrite as opposed to a monster. What makes someone a hypocrite?â
Jose Serrano, a boy whose family had recently arrived from Puerto Rico, raised his hand. âA hypocrite is someone who says one thing is right, but does the opposite.â
âCorrect. Have we all been hypocrites?â
Everyone in the class nodded.
âWhich is better? To have ideals and yet fail to follow them perfectly and be called a hypocrite, or to have no ideals and commit horrible acts with no shame and be called a monster?â Sam paused for effect.
âWhat makes America exceptional is not her perfect keeping of the ideals, but for founding a country with those ideals in the first place. Ideals like freedom of speech, religion, things like that. Weâve even worked hard at following them. Does that make any sense?â
Madelyn, John, Donovan, and the rest of the class nodded.
Mr. Franklin continued, âIn order to be better people and a better country, we need to see ourselves as we truly are, the bad and the good, the pimples and the dimples...â Sam went back to his lecture.
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âSeriously, dude, think about it,â Donovan whispered. âSheâs probably into you enough to let you talk to her.â
John didnât know what to say to that. Madelyn had the reputation for being a bit spacey, and so he didnât always know quite how she was going to respond. One time, she was eating one of those prepackaged cream-filled cupcakes while walking to class. She was so focused on it that she walked right into a wall. Her classmates had teased her about that for several days. She was probably embarrassed, but she never let on that she was.
After class, John waited at the door. Donovan patted him on the arm, whispered âgood luck,â and left to hurry on to his next class. Then, the slight smell of strawberries snagged his nose. He knew that smell. Madelyn was walking past.
âHey, Madelyn,â John finally dug up the courage to say.
âHey, what?â Madelyn answered, brushing one of her bangs behind her ear. John hated when girls did that. It always stole the words from his mouth. âUm, how are you?â
âIâm doing okay. I got an âAâ on my history test. What did you get?â
John hurriedly tried to think of a suave answer, but all he managed to grunt was, âI got a âB.ââ
âThatâs great. Mr. Franklinâs new this year. The last teacher we had was really easy. People I talked to said they didnât even have to study. They completed lessons on their tablets while he sat at his desk. Itâs okay, I guess. I enjoy studying. Itâs like eating for the brain.â
âOh yeah,â John said, trying to lean on a wall casually. âMe too, except for cupcakes. You have to lay off those,â John said. He grimaced, and an awkward silence filled the hallway. A couple pairs of shoes squeaked on the freshly waxed floor behind them. John wanted to die. Why was talking to girls so hard?
Finally, Madelyn said, âWell, I gotta get to my locker. Iâll talk to you later.â
âSure, uh, that sounds fine.â
As Madelyn walked toward her locker, Johnâs right hand hit him in the forehead as if it had a mind of its own. âYou idiot!â He scolded himself. He slunk to his locker and got his books for his next few classes.
During the next few hours, he dreaded meeting up with Donovan again. He knew that Donovan would make fun of him for messing up. Unfortunately, the bell rang, mercilessly signaling lunch time. The food court at Battle Axe Central High School was large, and all the walls were slathered in a creamy shade of white. Like the rest of the building, it had only existed for a year, and it showed. Everything was clean and brand new. Donovan waved him over to their usual table.
âSo, how did it go?â Donovan asked, placing potato chips on his peanut butter and jelly sandwich. John plopped down across from him. âI told her to stop eating cupcakes.â
Donovan, who had been aggressively chewing his sandwich, almost choked with laughter. âYou what?â
âI canât help it. I froze.â
âDude, Iâm trying not to take offense at the fact you have no problem punching me in the face but canât say something even sort of intelligent to a girl. Girls donât usually like it when you remind them of times when they did something stupid.â
âItâs just when I talk to girls, I canât think of anything to say.â
âI can see that. Iâll take you by Emileeâs window later today so you can see a master at work.â
âYou really seem to like her,â John said, glad for the change of subject. He knew he messed up. He didnât need his best friend reminding him.
âDuh. Sheâs friendly and beautiful and has curves in all the right places. Whatâs not to like?â
âNow,â John said, using his best impression of an upper-class British accent, âIs that a chivalrous way to talk about a lady? You know, thereâs something unsettling about her, but I canât put my finger on it.â
Donovan smiled and arched an eyebrow. âDude, you sound like my grandfather! Anyway, youâre just jealous, John. Thereâs a girl for you out there somewhere, someone who doesnât like cupcakes,â Donovan punched his friend in the shoulder. âBy the way, do you want a cupcake? I mean, a real one?â He held up two well-made chocolate cupcakes with chocolate frosting.
âSure, I guess?â John said as he took one. It smelled amazing, so he took a bite. âHey, this is pretty good! Where are you getting these things, anyway? It just seems kinda random.â
âEmilee bakes them for me. Pretty cool, right? A girl who bakes like this has to be awesome.â
John frowned and set down the half-eaten cupcake. âOh, okay. Anyway, I just hope I figure out how to talk to a girl before I die of old age.â
âYeah, or when you die as a world-famous monster Hunter. Oh, speaking of which, are you training this Saturday?â
âNo, my dad isnât on call at the hospital this weekend, so he wants to do some male-bonding.â John bit into an apple, perhaps a little too hard. âWeâre going camping, if thatâs what you want to call it. Basically, heâs going to get drunk on Friday night, weâll fish a little on Saturday, and then heâll drink himself through Sunday.â
âAt least you donât have your sister trying to tag along with everything you do. Sheâs started training this weekend. Can you believe my parents said that she could be a Chronicler?â Donovan said angrily.
âI donât know what that means,â John said.
âIt means she wants to write down artsy reports of what we do when we Hunt. It means that even though she doesnât have the Gift, she wants to pretend to be a Hunter. She even gets to critique my Hunting patrols,â Donovan said.
âWell, maybe she just wants to help,â John offered. He never liked it when Donovan talked this way about Corinne. She had never been anything but nice to John, but Donovan seemed to resent everything she did. âWhatâs your problem with her?â
âSheâs never even fought vampires or anything. She never will. Sheâs got no powers. How would she know how to fight them? Sheâs always showing off how much smarter she is than everybody.â
âMaybe sheâll be good at it,â John said. âGive her a chance.â
âYeah, whatever,â Donovan mumbled. The bell rang for class, and they walked to their next class in silence.