Should i carry on with this?

I have more books I'm in the process of improving like:

Proof reading

Adding more bits

Grammar

Punctuation

So I don't know if I can jungle so many books that are in makes and this one seems to have no fan base so I don't know.

If you do lmk but I'd doubt  it

Look at my other books or the ones I've put on my page l that are really good!