SURIANI
Suriani handed her daughter the keys as they stood outside their little shop. It was a warm evening.
They were closing up late, so the streets were quiet. She could hear the rush of traffic from the main highway beyond.
Although theyâd had to stay behind longer than sheâd hoped, at least they wouldnât have to contend with rush-hour traffic. It could be hell in and around Kuala Lumpur.
âDamnit,â Kylie muttered, struggling with the lock.
âHere, give them to me,â Suriani said, holding out her hand.
âNo, Iâve got it. There!â She slipped the keys into her pocket with a smile, then straightened her blouse and brushed her long dark hair from her shoulder.
Suriani watched her daughter with a smile. She was beautiful, talented, successful. God had truly blessed her with an incredible ~accident~.
Kylie grinned back. She wrapped her arm around Surianiâs waist, and they walked back together to the car.
âGood amount of customers today,â Kylie said.
âAll to do with your marketing.â
âMore to do with your creativity, I think. I wish I could sew like you.â
âBut you donât like sewing.â
Kylie laughed. âThatâs right. I forgot.â
They both reached the car, and Suriani paused to look up at the sky. She cocked her head. âWhatâs that?â
Kylie looked up, the keys halfway in the lock. She gasped. âWow! Is that a shooting star?â
It was drifting, an orange globe in the sky. It looked a bit like a beam from a flashlight.
âMaybe. But how can it be if itâs not shooting?â Suriani asked.
They both jumped. Suriani dropped her purse.
âThere it goes!â Kylie cried.
Suriani watched as it streaked across the sky. It was the most astounding shooting star; it seemed to be burning. They watched as it arched over the buildings, then over the trees. It vanished.
They both jumped again as a flash of bright light lit up the night like fireworks.
âWow!â Kylie exclaimed.
Kylie might be excited, but Suriani wasnât so sure. She picked up her purse. âLetâs get in the car.â
âWhy the hurry?â Kylie asked.
âI donât like this,â Suriani said.
âIt was just a comet, Mama.â
âAre you sure about that?â
Kylie turned and frowned at her. Then she smiled. âYou and your superstitions.â
But she pushed the key in the lock again and opened the door. She turned to look at Suriani, then froze.
Suriani spun around. The tops of the trees were waving in a strong breeze that seemed to have picked up from nowhere. The scarf around her neck fluttered.
Suriani narrowed her eyes. Up ahead were two figures. It was hard to see much in the darkness, but they looked like men.
âWhere have they come from?â Suriani said. There was nothing beyond the trees but a highway.
Suriani looked at her daughter, and her daughter looked back, the same insane thought crossing their minds. Kylie yanked open the driverâs seat door, and Suriani hurried over to the passenger seat. She clipped on her seatbelt.
Kylieâs hand was shaking as she tried to turn on the engine, but it kept sputtering. It wasnât unusual. It needed time to warm up. Time they didnât have.
Suriani looked over her shoulder. They were definitely men. And they were close now. Too close. How fast were they moving? She blinked. Was it just her fears playing tricks on her, or did they look big? ~Real~ big? They couldnât be Malays. They had to be foreigners of some kind. Peculiar ones. ~Dangerous~ ones.
âHurry up, Kylie!â
âIâm trying. Iâm trying!â
Suriani tried to calm herself. It was probably nothing. ~Definitely~ nothing. These two men had nothing to do with the comet and the light. It was a coincidenceâthat was all. It ~had~ to be. And there was every possibility they werenât criminals out to hurt them. Maybe they were lost. Maybe they were looking for help.
She looked over her shoulder again and yelped. They were right upon them!
Kylie sucked in a breath. Again and again and again she turned the key, pushing down on the accelerator with no effect.
Suriani reached over. âStop. Thatâs enough. Youâll just wreck the engine.â
Kylie released the keys. âItâs probably nothing,â she said, taking a breath as the two men approached on either side of their car.
Surianiâs heart leapt in her throat. Realizing they hadnât even locked the car, she pressed the button. The locks clicked into place.
The man on Kylieâs side leaned into the window. He tapped it with his knuckle.
Kylie rolled down the window a sliver. âH-hello. Can we help you?â
On Surianiâs side, the second man leaned in just as close, so close his breath was misting the glass. Suriani was rightâthey certainly werenât locals. They were black and very tall with long braided hair, and yet they didnât look African or from any race Suriani recognized. She couldnât explain it. There was something wrong with their jaws, with the overall shape of their faces.
But that was hardly the strangest thing. She sucked in a choking breath. Their eyes! What was wrong with their eyes? Were they high on something? Drug dealers. They had to be drug dealers!
âOh my God!â Kylie yelped. Quickly, she rolled the window back up.
The man on Surianiâs side was tapping on her window now.
âKylie,â Suriani gasped, reaching over to grip onto her hand.
âMamaâ¦â
Surianiâs heart was thudding in her ears as the man on Kylieâs side tried the handle. He paused to glare at them through the glass with those terrifying golden eyes.
âLeave us alone!â Kylie screamed.
He tried the handle again. This time he wrenched at it. They both screamed. The door was buckling!
âMama!â
Suriani wrapped her arms around her daughter and pulled her close, trying to protect her, as though she could do ~anything~. They screamed again as the man on the other side wrenched at Surianiâs door.
Releasing her daughter, Suriani grabbed at the handle futilely. She prayed under her breath. Finally, with a screech and a ~bang!~ Kylieâs door wrenched free. It swung open so hard that it came off one of its hinges. Then the man was grabbing for her daughter.
âNo!â Unclipping her seatbelt, Suriani lurched across the seat, across her screaming daughter, bashing at his hands and scrabbling at his arms.
She turned at a second ~bang~! Now there were hands and arms around her too as the second man tried to pull her from the car. Gritting her teeth, Suriani clutched onto her daughter. Her daughter clutched back as the two men tried to rip them apart.
âNo, no, no! Donât take her! Take me! Take me!â Suriani cried.
The man grabbing her was babbling something in his language in a low, gruff voice.
Kylie screamed as she was yanked from Surianiâs grasp.
âNo!â
Then she, herself, was dragged bodily out of the car, stumbling beside the huge, wild-looking man.
She couldnât stop staring up at his eyes.
âWho are you?â she said.
He didnât answer.
He probably didnât understand her.
âPlease donât hurt me. Donât hurt my daughter.â