Chapter 5: Chapter 5 — Don’t Look Back

Aetherscorned (Progression Fantasy with LitRPG elements)Words: 16959

The ground rumbled.

Liam paused mid-step, shifting his weight to brace against the tremor. It wasn’t strong, just a subtle quake beneath the soles. But he recognized the sensation. A mechanical undertone, not natural. Rhythmic. Intentional.

Peter looked up from where he was kicking a pebble down the path. “Was that an earthquake?”

“No.” Liam pointed ahead. “Look.”

They had crested the final ridge before the descent into the outer boroughs of Daventry. Below them, the city stretched like a basin of metal and stone, low-lying and tightly packed between clawed foothills. Only now, it wasn’t just nestled there. It was sinking.

From their vantage, they could see the outer ring of Daventry descending by inches. Whole neighborhoods, complete with chimneys and steam plumes, dropped on massive hydraulic supports. Copperwork struts and interlocking pistons hissed and folded inward like a collapsing flower. Even the rail lines adjusted with eerie precision, segments lifting and locking out of the way before re-aligning.

Peter shaded his eyes with one hand. “W-wait. The entire city’s going underground?”

“The outer sections,” Liam confirmed. “Daventry’s built in layers. When a typhoon’s near, the top sinks, the core seals.”

“That’s… terrifyingly brilliant,” Peter muttered. “Wish we did that back home.”

“You don’t.”

Peter glanced at him. “Why not?”

“It means the storm’s real close.”

Peter’s grin vanished.

They descended the ridge at a brisk pace, both now aware of the ticking clock. The wind had shifted. Warmer now, charged. Liam kept his gaze on the lowering city, mentally calculating distance. Three miles, maybe four. A slow descent would buy them a little time. But not much.

They passed a rusted signpost, half-swallowed by moss. Its lettering had long since faded, but the post bore a newer marker, stamped with a bent triangle. Below it, someone had chalked a crude arrow and the words: Bunker. Do not delay.

Liam pointed. “That way.”

Peter followed without complaint, though his steps were quick and uncertain. They moved off the trail and toward the flat, broken terrain that sloped toward the city’s skirts.

As they made their way across the fractured grasslands, Liam gestured to the east. “Check the ridge.”

Peter turned. And stopped.

A massive aqueduct arched across the hills, towering hundreds of feet above the valley. Dozens of gleaming copper pipes clung to its frame like veins, channeling water from the distant mountains. The flow diverted in part toward Daventry, sluicing through large gate valves that hissed open and shut with hydraulic precision. Other channels forked off into the wilds, snaking their way toward distant settlements and mining outposts, faint smudges on the edge of the horizon.

Service gondolas crawled beneath the aqueduct’s span like ants, inspecting welds and pressure junctions. Below, the dirt roadways were dotted with sealed freight wagons bearing marked sigils; chemical cargo, oil, raw fuel, each locked in watertight storage. No part of it touched open air.

Peter let out a low whistle. “That’s… industrial. I mean, like, absurdly impressive.”

“It’s the backbone,” Liam said. “Daventry’s water supply. Nothing magical about it. Just scale.”

Peter glanced toward the distant typhoon with a wary eye. “It can’t mess with those, can it?”

Liam shook his head. “Typhoons don’t affect non-living things? Things without magic? I don’t know, something like that. Not directly, at least. That’s why everything’s sealed. Just in case.”

Peter nodded slowly. “Still looks like a disaster waiting to happen.”

“Only if someone opens the wrong valve.”

They continued in silence after that, their boots crunching on old gravel and buried metal. The ground was scored with grooves, rivulets carved by decades of runoff and redirected flow. A toppled pressure vent jutted from the ground at an angle, half-melted at the top. The Confederacy’s signature: precise, engineered, and scarred by its own necessities.

Then Peter asked, voice tight, “Can we make it in time?”

Liam didn’t answer.

Peter’s steps slowed. “I mean, seriously. I know you’re the quiet brooding type, but if we’re about to die…”

“No.” Liam stopped. “We won’t make it.”

Peter blinked. “But the bunker?”

“You might.”

He pointed toward a solitary pole jutting from the cracked earth, maybe two hundred yards away. At its base, half-buried by weeds and old support struts, was a grated entrance surrounded by faded hazard signs.

“Steel mark,” Liam said. “Signal post. Bunker access.”

Peter’s face paled. “You’re not coming?”

“I won’t make it before the winds hit,” Liam said calmly. “Not with this shoulder.”

Peter was already shaking his head. “Screw that. I’ll cast something. Something fast.”

Liam turned toward him, his expression unreadable. “Don’t waste it. Save yourself. You can’t carry both of us.”

“I can try.”

“You’ll die trying.” Liam’s voice was low, but firm. “Don’t be stupid.”

Peter opened his mouth, but closed it again. His hands trembled. “You said you’d find another way in. That wasn’t a lie, right?”

Liam didn’t respond immediately. Then: “It wasn’t.”

Peter stared at him for a heartbeat longer. Then two. And still didn’t move.

The horizon screamed.

Colors writhed across the sky like blood in oil. Deep red, sickly jade, blinding cobalt. Streaks of unnatural lightning threaded through clouds that had begun to spiral counter to the wind. The edge of the typhoon had arrived. The wind didn’t pick up so much as twist, curling like fingers around the landscape.

“I’ll find you in the bunker,” Liam said. “But only if you get there first.”

Peter didn’t nod. He just turned. And ran.

Liam watched him go, the lute case bouncing wildly on his back.

Then he turned to meet the storm.

The wind hit like a scream.

It wasn’t sound. Not exactly. More like pressure, or feeling. Like being shouted at by the sky through the bones in your spine.

Liam didn’t flinch. He didn’t even try to brace himself, simply watching as the world unraveled.

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The first wave of magic rolled over the ridge like a tidal wall of light and emotion. It wasn’t just colors. It was moods. Guilt-blue, hysteria-pink, a green so bitter it made his teeth ache. The air rippled, folding into impossible geometries: cubes inside spheres that blinked like eyelids, fractal flowers blooming in reverse.

A chorus of frogs materialized midair, each the size of a melon and wearing bowler hats. They croaked the sound of violins being tuned, then exploded into static and soap bubbles. The bubbles floated lazily for half a heartbeat, then popped, releasing the scent of fresh-baked bread.

Liam stepped forward.

Where he walked, the world vanished. All of it. Ivy made of sapphire veins curled toward him, glitched, then blinked out. A nearby boulder twisted into a screaming face and begged him to remember its name, then evaporated with a wheeze when he drew near.

The typhoon didn’t see him. Couldn’t.

He was a blank space in a dream, a tear in the painting. The storm tore reality apart and rebuilt it with every second. But where Liam walked, it was as if nothing had ever existed.

A school of tiny fish floated past his head, their bodies made of glass and steam. One whispered an equation in his ear that caused him to tilt his head, wondering if it meant anything. Another left behind a string of pearls with little blinking eyes that winked out of existence when Liam lifted a finger and poked it.

A house made of clock faces erupted from the ground nearby. The faces had no hands. Only reflections. But none showed Liam. No matter how he moved, each surface bent to avoid his image, flickering through strangers' lives instead: a boy born underwater, a girl aging backwards, a man who wept flowers. The doors blinked shut like eyelids. The building sagged, its clocks liquefying into a black syrup that smelled like old parchment and thunder. Then it sank back into the earth without a sound.

Lightning struck beside him. The ground didn’t crack. It laughed. A hissing, infantile giggle echoed through the soil. A patch of grass stood up and walked away on legs shaped like quills.

Liam kept walking.

He passed a tree with hands for leaves. The fingers waved as he drew near, grasping for something. Before they could touch him, the entire tree disintegrated into feathers made of iron, which clattered to the ground and then sank into it like water.

The wind shifted again. The pressure changed.

The sky broke open like glass. A third moon, a fake one, made of wax and blood, spiraled across the firmament. It dripped something like honey down onto the hills. Where the droplets landed, towers of hair grew. Some braided themselves. One bowed as Liam walked past.

Time hiccuped. For a few seconds, the world moved in frames. The ground stuttered under his feet, and the horizon jumped like a scratched reel of film. Only Liam was untouched, moving through the river of time with not even a single hiccup as the world around him tilted and whirled. Then everything snapped back.

Ahead, the pole.

The bunker access loomed ahead, half-shrouded in a fog that shimmered like static and whispered in half-formed voices. As Liam drew closer, the fog clung stubbornly to the air until tendrils brushed against his skin. Then, with a sound like a tape unspooling, the magic unraveled on contact, retreating in curling wisps. Illusions nearby twisted to avoid him, but not fast enough. One brush, one graze, and they collapsed into nothing, like dreams punctured by waking. Even the hallucinations seemed to flinch, their forms fraying at the edges when he passed too near.

The hatch stood before him. A circle of steel set into concrete, half-swallowed by overgrown moss and warped shadows. But untouched. Unchanged.

While the world around it twisted and shimmered in madness, the hatch remained inert, its surface beaded with condensation but otherwise untouched by the storm.

The sigil stamped into the metal, a containment glyph common in city infrastructure, looked perfectly ordinary. As if the typhoon didn’t even notice it. Or couldn’t. It was a point of stability in a shifting dream, and Liam reached for it like a lifeline.

Liam put one hand on the handle and pulled.

The door hissed open. Clean air spilled out. Cold, filtered. Real.

He stepped inside and left the madness behind, sealing the outer hatch shut with a pull and a sound like finality. Like reality saying: welcome back.

Liam stood in a small, dim chamber, a single solitary gas lamp embedded in the wall flickering to provide light. The walls were bare concrete, lined with pressure valves and copper piping. A second hatch loomed ahead, identical to the first, rimmed with rust but still sealed tight. Between the two was just enough space to house two or three people, though they would have to stand close together.

A faint metallic click echoed through the space as the inner mechanisms adjusted. No lights flashed. No sirens sounded. The silence was deliberate. The chamber didn’t need alarms or defenses. It was a buffer zone, built to isolate the outside from the inside. Until the first hatch sealed completely, the second would remain locked. That was the point: keep the wild magic out by never letting both doors open at once. Simple, but effective.

It did nothing to him. His skin already canceled any magic that touched it. Still, he waited. These systems were meant for others, not for him.

After thirty long seconds, a bolt clicked, and with a pull, the inner hatch began to turn.

He stepped through.

The inner chamber was much larger, roughly the size of a small warehouse. Oil lamps hung from reinforced beams overhead, casting light across the concrete walls and stacks of crates. Rations, cots, and old supply bins lined the edges. The air smelled of sweat, metal, and the faint charge of recently deactivated wards.

A dozen people were inside. Most looked like outer-rim laborers. Their clothes were tough but worn, coated in dust and streaks of engine oil. A few had traces of alchemical dye on their gloves or boots. One leaned on a bent railspike like a cane. Another cradled a bleeding forearm wrapped in a torn scarf.

All of them turned to look at Liam.

Their expressions shifted quickly. Not toward welcome. Toward unease.

Silence spread across the room like oil on water.

A few muttered low words to one another.

One man, stocky with thick sideburns and a silver-threaded jacket, narrowed his eyes. “Where’s the other one?”

Liam frowned. “What other—”

Then Peter stepped into view from behind a crate. His shirt clung to him with sweat, but he looked unharmed. His eyes lit up as soon as he spotted Liam.

“You made it!”

Peter jogged over, smiling with honest relief. His presence cut through the tension in the room like a burst of sunlight. Liam didn’t return the smile, but his stance relaxed slightly.

Peter slowed as he got closer. “You look awful.”

Liam shrugged his uninjured shoulder. “Storm didn’t touch me.”

Another murmur passed through the room. One woman near the far wall whispered something to a man beside her. The word “wrong” carried just loudly enough to hear.

Peter caught it too. “What’s their problem?”

“They always look at me like that,” Liam muttered, gaze fixed ahead. “Doesn’t matter.”

Peter’s smile faltered. “Back there… when you said magic doesn’t work on you. That wasn’t just about healing, was it?”

Liam said nothing. Peter didn’t push.

Instead, he turned to the room and raised his voice. “He saved my life, by the way. Just so you know.”

The words landed like a thrown stone. Some looked away. One person scoffed. Another, seated near a small heater, just stared at Liam without blinking.

Peter took a breath, then smiled, this time gentler. “Look, I know this isn't exactly a party. I know we're all tired and shaken and waiting for the sky to stop trying to kill us. But he's not the enemy. He helped me when he didn’t have to. Risked his life, actually.”

A few of the others shifted in their seats. One woman glanced at Peter, then at Liam, her expression uncertain.

Peter shrugged. “I get it. He’s quiet. Intense. He also killed a monster the size of a cart with a single arm. But that arm’s made of steam and guts and it sounds like it’s held together by spite. Which, frankly, I find kind of inspiring.”

There was a ripple of restrained amusement. Just the hint of a smile here and there.

Peter pressed on. “We’re not looking to take anyone’s spot. Just passing through. But if you’re going to sit here judging him, at least do it with the full story.”

He turned to Liam and tilted his head. “We’ll just keep to ourselves.”

Liam didn’t answer, but for the first time since entering the bunker, the tension in the room had shifted.

They moved to a quieter corner where crates had been stacked into a makeshift divider. Two bedrolls and an oil lamp sat nearby. It smelled more strongly of fuel, but at least it was private.

Peter dropped his pack with a grunt and slumped against the nearest crate. “How bad is it out there?”

“Bad,” Liam said. “But it’ll pass.”

“How long?”

“Could be hours. Could be longer.”

Peter leaned his head back and closed his eyes. “I miss beds.”

He watched Liam unpack for a moment. “You really walked through all of that? Alone?”

Liam nodded.

Peter opened one eye. “Was it weird?”

“Yes.”

Peter waited for more. When none came, he sighed again and rubbed at his face.

“I hate this place.”

Liam didn’t argue.

Peter tilted his head back, trying to will away the ache in his legs. His body still shook slightly from the stress. The way the others looked at Liam made his stomach twist. It wasn’t fair. It wasn’t right. But he also didn’t know what to say.

Then, footsteps approached.

Soft cloth. Sandaled feet. The sound barely registered.

When Peter opened his eyes, a woman stood just beyond the edge of their space.

She looked to be in her early thirties, with braided hair woven through with silver thread. Her robes were a mix of green and ivory, with delicate leaf patterns embroidered near the hem. Around her neck hung a symbol carved from pale jade—an aloe vera leaf with nine symmetrical points.

Peter blinked. The woman was looking straight at him.

She didn’t acknowledge Liam.

“I need a word,” she said gently.

Peter hesitated. “Okay.”

She stepped forward and crouched until they were eye level.

She whispered, obviously trying to speak softly enough that Liam would be unable to hear.

“I know what you are.”

Peter stared at her, breath catching in his throat.